短文改错（共10小题）

     英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。

     I am willing to become college graduate who works as a village official but I’d like to come back to my hometown to help with the economic development of the relative poor villages.

     For one thing, I want to devote myself to help those in need in return with the help of the society. And I will apply that I have learnt to developing the poor villages. For another, I myself am from a poor village. I feel very sad while I see my parents and my fellow villagers struggling to make end meet, and I have always been dreaming of improving our lives with my own efforts. 

     I think I’ll take advantage of this opportunity to make my dream to come true.

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